Wednesday, September 18, 2013

An Analysis of Figures of Speech Of Nadia's Work

Finding something that never exist
Place that I can change my tune
I know I'm the type of girl who less favored about feeling
And I was blind since you're not here

But I don't know why
I'm waiting like a year without rain
Such a stupid thing

Finallly you're coming back to my life
That day was out of the blue
And I realize that  this day is not over till you come back to my life
-enhaka-

Responses:

-  "Finallly you're coming back to my life"The writer softens the idea by using Euphimism . It is clear that the person has gone for a long time. And the word "finally" means that the writer's hope come true.

-  By taking the word "I know I'm the type of girl who less favored about feeling"It is the example of Euphimism. It means the writer show the reader that the writer's characteristic is not really interested about the writer's feeling.

-  "I'm waiting like a year without rain" it is an exaggeration or hyperbole,it shows that the writer's feeling is very lonely and need someone coming back. A further attraction is created by " if there is no you ,it seems like nothing" 

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Storm

I'm growling to my self
This heart bawling like the rain falling down
The storm is coming
Without any invitations

I appear invisible
This life is pretty cruel
And I'm like a living dead
Full of great depression

I won't stay
Of beaing not okay
I want to run away
And find the best way
-enhaka- (11/9/13)

Responses :
I appear invisible
This life is pretty cruel
And I'm like a living dead
Full of great depression

-The writer creates an Oxymoron words,actually all of them are oxymoron.By taking the word 'living dead' means the writer is alive but it seems like dead.

'This heart bawling like the rain falling down' is Simile .The simile suggests that the writer's sound is bawling and growling. The writer's feeling is very mournful. Further attraction, the writer create that her life is depressed. By taking the word 'Like the rain falling down' is like breaking into a million pieces and falling everywhere.

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When I'm looking to your eyes
I'm freezing like cold Ice
Feeling warmer like sunrise
Living in the skies

The illusion is coming back
Make me feel in random order
Butterflies are grunting in my stomach
Try to hold act naturally

The sunshine squirts in the sky
Drizzling rain is falling down
There's something dripping from my eyes 
And I'm sprinkling my smile to everyone

Earth has a rotation
But I'm still in your reflection
Try to stay in this section
And enjoy this vacation
-enhaka-

Responses :
' I'm freezing like cold Ice
Feeling warmer like sunrise' is the example of Simile, the writer creates that her feeling is happy. It might be when the writer meet with someone , the writer act like a 'cold ice' means the writer is very nervous and can't do anything.

'Butterflies are grunting in my stomach' grunting is the example of Onomatopoeia. It seems to copy the loud and snore sounds of animal in stomach.

'Drizzling rain is falling down' Drizzling is the example of Onomatopoeia. It sounds like the water dripping from the sky and hitting the metal thing , like roof tiles.

'But I'm still in your reflection' is Metaphor. However metaphor suggests the writer is living in a place that really comfortable and doesn't want to leave it.



1 comment:

  1. Hi Via! (sounds like Vaya) this is my analysis about your poems, I hope this is would be useful for us :) http://nadikidalkadal.blogspot.com/2013/09/an-analysis-of-figures-of-speech-of.html what a great poems! Subhanallah^^

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