The writer’s purpose is to give information
about her own life and to create sympathy. . In the first paragraph ,the writer puts “injustice, racisms, criminals, “.Actually injustice and racisms are abstract
nouns, so the writer supposed to put crime than criminals. And at the second
line of the first paragraph the writer should not put comma before the word “
and”.
The writer tries to attract the reader by sarcastic
sentence the first paragraph. The reader is forced to imagine what it must be
like to live in fear of one’s life in cramped conditions.
In the second paragraph , there is an error in
the first sentence where the writer only a tobebefore the word become. The tobe is supposed to
be eliminated. As in the first sentence, the writer should use past tenses because it
tells about what had happened.
At the same
time, the clause shows the writer’s story was tense. The article shows that
she never was in a good condition. The writer puts lots of conflicts there,
which can make the reader become attracted and feared.
In the
third paragraph ,the writer starts to tell her story from the first time she
went to school ,by taking the word “school
was like a prison “
shows that her day was filled with war,.
Next, in
the fourth paragraph ,the writer uses the words “Latino’s, Chinese, Ghettos, and a white kid” signifies that the writer’s school was
acist. The writer puts oxymoron word which is “It’s quite painful.
The fifth paragraph the writer uses a figure of speech which is
repetition, that can be found in a word “Shouted
at each other, mocked at each other” .The word “each other is repeated.It is used
twice.
In the seventh paragraph, the writer uses a sentence “my
Chinese friend died “ the writer uses sarcastic tone. The writer actually
should put a euphemism to make it more smoothie.
In the last
paragraph ,the writer uses capital letters,it is seen from the word “SHE COULD TEACH US UNTIL WE FINISHED OUR JUNIOR
HIGH SCHOOL. “ the purpose is to give an anger effect .
At the end the
writer shows that the teacher’s dream which is “make her students better” is coming true. And
the writer uses a pleasant tone.
No comments:
Post a Comment