Monday, April 28, 2014

The Real Analysis



A     o     n       e

A word that's very WRONG
Has a big power to make you f
                                             a
                                              l
                                              l
And      a     w      a      y    you   from the existence of ALLAH
Who      By
always   Your
stay        Side

Analysis of Via's work

In this poem , the size of the texts are totally different .The writer starts from largest to the smallest. It shows the mourn expression of the writer.In this poem ,the writer uses an abstract line.The shape of the text are totally can not be seen as a real shape, because in this poem, there are so many types of phases
The writer also crosses the "WRONG" word , to convince the reader that it has a wrong meaning.
The word "fall" it is set from up to down, to give an effect the real definition of fall. In the fourth line, the writer put many spaces, because from the word "away" .


Sometimes
Sometimes you need to d i s t a n c e
your self to see things clearly
Sometimes a little rebellion
is a good thing
Sometimes you have to forget
what's g  o  n  e


Analysis of Nadia's work

In the second line of the first poem , the writer put a big space of the word "distance". It is separated to describe what distance is, which is "faraway". In the second line ,there is a word "Clearly" ,the writer bold the text and make the size bigger, to show a convincing effect, so the reader can easily read it. Next is the word "little rebellion" ,it designed as a tiny font. And also the writer crosses the word "forget" , it means the writer wants to shows  a firm decision effect.Some of the lines are longer and some are shorter..And as the reader can see from the last text, the extra spaces are given in that part ,by taking the word " gone".



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